Tuesday, December 29, 2009

Desire

In longing I sigh
In yearning I cry
To pine in your hold
To dissolve in your world
To breathe on your lips silently
To break into bits fervidly

If finding you is a soulful anxiety
Missing you is acheful bliss

-Mon

7 comments:

  1. "Blue like the ocean, silent waiting
    Blue like the river, floating by
    I will tell you I'm fine but
    It won't be true
    If I can't have your love
    If I can't be with you
    I'll be forever blue"

    The great, Gareth Gates

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    "Nights don't come any longer
    Days seem to last forever
    Nothing you can do
    Could bring him back to you
    Forever blue

    Memories don't come stronger
    Dreams lost and gone forever
    Softly whispering
    Won't bring him back to you
    Forever blue"

    === Swing out Sisters

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  2. Anonymous: You have tastes in verse I relate to :-)

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  3. To write real BLUE...
    fall in love
    with someone who
    will certainly cheat you

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  4. I think now we need to change the heart color from Red to Blue :-) Many people are influenced by this color.. By the way, I like this line a lot.. "To breathe on your lips silently".. Too good!!

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  5. @Altaf: Thanks buddy for reading and commenting. Good idea about changing the heart color....and btw the same line is the one I liked best too!!!!

    @Anon - So true, huh? So you want me to fall in love with you....then you betray me and I claim my way to glory being the 'blue poetess'....clap clap clap

    But for all of above, don't you think you must tell me who you are...we can think of next steps then :-)

    An afterthought.....how do you know I am not being cheated already in love :-)???????

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