I dreamt of a death last night,
The deceased was unknown to me,
They said the name was “Heart”,
A tragic murder it seemed to be.
Faith and Trust the kith and kin,
Had already passed away,
Bereft in this commercial world,
Heart had no reason to stay.
Those who looked on in amusement,
Had a fancy story to relate,
Of how sincerely Heart went about,
Surrendering willingly to fate.
It seems first emotions were slashed,
With the sharp razor of practicality,
Then methodically care and kindness were strangled,
As Heart drained itself of humanity.
With the last struggle of helplessness,
Love flowed out of every cell,
Pain trickled down the eyes,
As Heart rang the death knell.
“Heart was a good ol’ chap”, they said,
Very different from the rest,
So instead of suffering in perpetual misery,
This suicide for Heart was best.
All paid their last respects,
And in life quickly moved on,
The museum fought for the final rights,
Of a relic that to the world would remain unknown!
-Monica
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It seems like one of those deaths due to the failure to cope with the modern urban life. Or does it describe the emptiness/uselessness of emotions like love faith trust etc in this modern day living.These things are gone for good. They belong to the last 150 years back period. Society has progressed technologically towards more automaton methods of life. New and different feelings/ thought process are evolving which will take hold in another fifty years period. Deinitions of kindness,humanity etc will change for good. Its very well that the heart commited suicide.
ReplyDeleteWell said the death of heart by suicide. Faith ,trust, kith, kin , emotions, humanity etc are things of the past. The society has evolved. These things were at their peak over last 100 years. Concepts are changing in the urbanised world and new values are evolving which will come into their own in the next fifty years. so it is very well that the heart commited suicide.
ReplyDeleteThanks for the feedback, Siva and for taking the time to read. Yes I agree the world is progressing fast and therefore Heart is bereft and lonely. But I am not happy about Heart's suicide cos if every heart does that we will be left in a mechanical world, of which I surely do nnot wish to be a part.
ReplyDeleteJust mindblowing...wonderful usage of words and amazing thoughts penned in the form of a poem...
ReplyDeleteJust too good...
Keep posting more blogs and keep me informed...
Hi Da Vinci
ReplyDeleteThank you for your appreciation and yes I'll keep you informed of my posts. I truly appreciate your time and effort in reading and writing back...thanks.